People should be allowed to obscure their identity online. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Many human consider that dissemble identity is the best method to enjoy life. I completely disagree with this opinion and think that everyone should be honest and show the real identity.
Firstly, many negative impact from this behaviour such as cyber crime. In other words, nowdays, all ages using internet to gather informations or something what they need, however another person makes mistake with doing some badness activities. Moreover, many people that deviating from truly norm and forget about what is the real function from internet, they prefer to do something that can make another people damage like as bullying, abusive language and online assault. For instance, twitter is the most popular platform in the word, my friend was became victim from cyber crime from this application, any some people suddenly said abusive language to her and tend to bullying, ultimately she decided to wiped out this platform because her mental was interfered. Thats why very important for all people to keep our words and our attitudes to respects each other foremost privacy of someone.
Secondly, the biggest effect from this situation can make each person feel not comfortable. When someone wrong to controling themselve to invent benefit to each other, they will made something it is out of the brain. In other words, they will indulge by found something that adverse to another person even they able to harrasing people. For example, michat is one disavantages to human, because from this only bringing indulgence in sometimes such as pornography action by share photo or video. Thus, identity of someone in this application will look vague because they frightened with the consequences.
To conclude, identity of person is one of the most important in the world because from identity we will know detail or spesific of someone foremost their name and visage, when occured something wrong will be easy to us for make some reporting to government or another official.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 553, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...lar platform in the word, my friend was became victim from cyber crime from this appli...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 768, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...form because her mental was interfered. Thats why very important for all people to ke...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...invent benefit to each other, they will made something it is out of the brain. In ot...
^^^^
Line 4, column 105, Rule ID: KNOW_NOW[5]
Message: Did you mean 'now'?
Suggestion: now
...the world because from identity we will know detail or spesific of someone foremost ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.159375 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51412999055 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.1732429325 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177919494328 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064552764176 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545933612481 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115585839956 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472289393709 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 553, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...lar platform in the word, my friend was became victim from cyber crime from this appli...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 768, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...form because her mental was interfered. Thats why very important for all people to ke...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...invent benefit to each other, they will made something it is out of the brain. In ot...
^^^^
Line 4, column 105, Rule ID: KNOW_NOW[5]
Message: Did you mean 'now'?
Suggestion: now
...the world because from identity we will know detail or spesific of someone foremost ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.159375 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51412999055 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.1732429325 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177919494328 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064552764176 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545933612481 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115585839956 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472289393709 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.