In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities.
Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
In some countries around the world, the authorities are looking forward to moving industries and businesses from highly populated cities to provincial areas. Despite some drawbacks, I would argue that there are more benefits.
We would talk about the negative side of this issue first. Indeed relocating companies will have some positive impact but they will have to cope with a decline in the number of qualified workers. To be specific, workers may not want to change their locations to regional areas. For instance, people living in Hanoi center find it inconvenient to move to Son Tay or Phu Xuyen because it is far from their houses. Moreover, businesses may face many challenges in contacting and meeting partners, who will most likely be substituted by other nearby suppliers. For example, in Hanoi, many enterprises are losing customers and clients in the former area when they relocate to Hoa Lac. As a result companies would have to spend a good amount of money to set up these shortcomings before starting their business and this is what most companies would not come to terms with.
On the other hand, there are more advantages to moving industries and businesses outside of crowded cities. Firstly, the labor market in the regional areas will increase when companies open the door of job opportunities for the village people. For example, Samsung Corp moves its business to Thai Nguyen, which is a small city in northern Vietnam and it has recruited thousands of employees in many positions like workers, officers or engineers. Clearly, industries and businesses move to regional areas, which is not only a good way to reduce unemployment but also improve the standard of living of people there. Secondly, workshop building takes up vast areas of land. Meanwhile, each square in the big cities is as precious as gold. In Hanoi, Samsung may have to pay 20 million VND for renting offices while in rural areas, the price is much lower. Lastly, industries should be moved to suburbs because they always produce emissions, which do harm to individuals’ physical health. Some research institutes have proved that people, who live close to the industrial zone within ten kilometers, have a much higher risk of getting cancers.
In conclusion, the merits of this trend certainly surpass its demerits. The relocation not only benefits the company itself but also the people in the suburbs as well as the city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2029.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05985037406 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64614734248 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59102244389 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9831811563 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.45 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.05 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.95 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2557602665 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699170886891 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060871445647 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145749511793 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759395326165 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.