The plans below show how the ground of a particular building has changed over time. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The Maps compare the ground floor’s changes in a particular building in 3 different periods. Overall, The ground floor changed from an office to an apartment and now it is a flower shop. The number of rooms has decreased over time.
From 1958 to 1984, The ground floor was an office, with a toilet and a reception area right from the entrance on the left and right, respectively. However, they were replaced by a bathroom and a bedroom between 1985 and 2000. In the first period, the office area was located in the middle of the ground floor, with an assistant’s office and a secretary's office rooms on the left and a manager's office opposite them. Yet, in the apartment, there was only a bedroom on the right. The office also consisted of a meeting room on the rightmost corner, where the living room was built in place of in the second period. Additionally, the kitchen remained in the rightmost corner remained unchanged.
From 2001, The apartment was converted into a flower shop, remaining until now. The shop has a play area right on the left from the entrance and a flower area on the right. Flowers are also displayed behind the play area and on the opposite side, there is an office that used to be the apartment’s bedroom. In addition, there is a gift card area built in place of the living room. It is obvious that the kitchen of the ground floor stays unchanged overtime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 386, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'managers'' or 'manager's'?
Suggestion: managers'; manager's
...cretarys office rooms on the left and a managers office opposite them. Yet, in the apart...
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Line 2, column 627, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e of in the second period. Additionally, the kitchen remained in the rightmost co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 248.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63709677419 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53815832026 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471774193548 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 344.7 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9946961927 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1428571429 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0754606613377 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362553024588 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593415968095 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826216437703 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091307291504 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.