Nowadays, the issue as to whether it is significant for parents to teach children to learn the difference between right and wrong when they were a litte age has remained a source of controversy. Personally, I completely agree with this notion and could be followed to propose some reasonable punishments for this situation.
To begin with, Children express their flexibility and learn from others such as gestures, behaviours and emotions with a astonishing progress. So The choice of teaching them at an early age is the best solution to form a good characteristic as soon as possible. For example, In term of personal features, Parents can teach how obey their relatives or elder people. This can impress them and understand the fact that it is a respectful behaviour in daily life. Furthermore, Children have to learn how to give a apologized sentence when make a mistake or disrespectful words. it helps them recognize and take an consideration about themselves, simultaneously, They may be more mature to solve other dilemma in full of dangerous society.
And I also hold fast to the belief that we should tackle these wrong actions by punishments but avoid hurting them. Because in this case, giving rise to making shortage of philanthropical behaviours, we can not only endure the pressure from angle of domestic, they are also be pessimistic by themselves In my own view, instead of using violence or cursing violently , I propose some solutions about moral deterrence and high responsibility. For instance,cutting down the money, which Youngsters spend too much playing computer games or require them to do household chores everyday to practise the patience.
In conclusion, I still agree decisively with this notion and By these aforementioned ideas and punishments, I'm sure about an undeniable fact that Children will become more and more mature day by day and a useful person in society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'astonishing progress'.
Suggestion: astonishing progress
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Message: The proper name in singular (In) must be used with a third-person verb: 'terms'.
Suggestion: terms
...ic as soon as possible. For example, In term of personal features, Parents can teach...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ore, Children have to learn how to give a apologized sentence when make a mistake...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...words. it helps them recognize and take an consideration about themselves, simulta...
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Suggestion: been
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Suggestion: ,
...d of using violence or cursing violently , I propose some solutions about moral de...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, still, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13548387097 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09647136994 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625806451613 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.2066166543 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.666666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30171605019 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983025457778 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557102611583 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173192746159 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885825856183 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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