The diagrams show a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010.
The diagrams illustrate the distinction changes in a museum as well as its scenery surrounding between 1990 and 2010.
In general, it is apparent that there was a replacement of the garden in the east for the expansion of the car park. In terms of the internal museum, several facilities were undergoing changes with the extension of the shop and the substitution of the cottage for a new cafe.
In 1990, the eastern part of the museum was divided into two specific areas with a small garden which was located close to the main road and a car park. Moving to the west, there was a stone path that led to the main entrance of the museum. The four major establishments on this side were separated, including a store room, a shop, an exhibition room, and a cottage near the main road.
20 years later, there was an increase in the width of the western part of the museum, accordingly, both the path and the eastern side were reduced in breadth. Specifically, the garden was cut down on to provide space for the expansion of the car park on the right side of the map. In regard to the west of the museum, while the main entrance has experienced a reduction in size, the store room and shop were widened. Noticeably, the cottage which was located to the south of the museum was substituted by a cafe. During the whole period, the exhibition room, the main road, and the garden surrounding the museum were three places that remained the same.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ution of the cottage for a new cafe. In 1990, the eastern part of the museum wa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, so, well, while, in general, as well as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 260.0 196.424390244 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56153846154 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55774725216 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469230769231 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.1370333891 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.818181818 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197156055794 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854307856115 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121697186135 0.0843802449381 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170149635686 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163673502601 0.0819641961636 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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