Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more convenient than when your grandparents were children.
Today’s life is certainly very different then it was during our grandparent generation. The world has evolved so much more before. In my opinion, I agree with the statement that life is easier and more convenient than when our grandparents were children. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, in now a days technology has progressed so much advanced than it was before 30-40 years. Technology and equipments which runs hand to hand has become convenient to use than grandparents were kids. My personal experience would be a great fit for such situation. Cellphone usage is so common and easy to use in today’s life, let alone the apps which comes in it. Decades ago, my grandfather had to stand in a queue in order to deposit a check. But look at the tremendous advantage of phone, one can deposit it with just a click of a button. As a result, so much time is saved which can be used in the productive activities. For this reason, I feel life is much more relaxed than grandparents were children.
Secondly, in today’s world transportation has become so much fast and smooth. There are various ways of transportation such as railways, roads, airplane, etc. Even owing a personal vehicle is not a big of a deal. Even going to schools and college has become easy and safe because of so much transportation available now a days. I remember once my grandmother told me that she had to walk everyday for 5-6 miles one way, just to attend school and then come back. Some days when their were rains or wind, she still had to walk. However now, hardly anyone uses the bike to go to school or college. Listening to such experiences, I agree with the above statement.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that today’s world life is easier and more convenient than when our grandparents were children. Also, there are minor things that I feel were better at that time but the majority wins.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, then, i feel, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65597667638 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72110544212 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527696793003 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6713028478 48.9658058833 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.5909090909 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5909090909 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77272727273 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324038647529 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948471428355 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14796800213 0.0737576698707 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247491627149 0.150856017488 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134168782489 0.0645574589148 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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