No one can target a wanted career prospect. And Having many straightforward prejudices about the issue as to whether to undertake a bad situation or try to improve the best situation in today's knowledge-based society has remained a source of controversy. Personally, I hold a stern belief that the best choice is superior to accept current situation.I write up my own opinion about two opposing ideas to clarify this essay.
On the one hand, A bad situation have a disadvantageous impact.Besides, there has also very practical merits.A society that fraught with all of danger, we can not distinguish between friends and enemies, good relationships or bad relationships. Only when felling left out, they get the misconceptions of profound values. Futhermore, A normal salary job or in case shortage of money, we can afford for daily expenses effectively and allocate their budget into things that value of them.
On the other hand, I would completely side with those who think that trying as much as possible for a better job opportunity will bring it with feasible impacts. There have several reason for me to recognize with this notion. First of all, They can have more priorities to comprehend themselves the most suitable situation in other expertises, they can spend much time to invest the widespread of a career path. Secondly, dual jobs also a better choice, especially in youngsters that having an ambitious thinking to achieve a huge salary. Futhermore, out of recognizing a bad situation, they have to a steady job to cover daily expenses sustainably. For instance, they can enhance English skills or taking part in some workshops or references of prosperous businesses to improve economy or investment sector.
By these radical aforementioned ideas, I still hold fast to the belief that we should try to our best to commit themselves to a better situation as well as a firm foothold in society than accepting in a high-risk and unstable position.
- The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose and can even be damaging To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 84
- The advantages brought by the spread of English as a global language with outweigh the disadvantage To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view 78
- The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose and can even be damaging To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 84
- In some parts of the world it is increasingly popular to research the history of one s own family Why do people want to do this Is it a positive or negative development 84
- Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organisation Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantages of being self employed 73
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
No one can target a wanted career prospe...
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Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...aightforward prejudices about the issue as to whether to undertake a bad situation or try to ...
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Line 1, column 353, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...is superior to accept current situation.I write up my own opinion about two oppos...
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Line 2, column 64, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Besides
...situation have a disadvantageous impact.Besides, there has also very practical merits.A...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...s, there has also very practical merits.A society that fraught with all of danger...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...budget into things that value of them. On the other hand, I would completely si...
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Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...ng it with feasible impacts. There have several reason for me to recognize with this notion. F...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... improve economy or investment sector. By these radical aforementioned ideas, I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, as to, for instance, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0900621118 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.080371208 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0202216943 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.076923077 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211535087957 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643648813758 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492298634257 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126619914088 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301188886294 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
No one can target a wanted career prospe...
^^
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...aightforward prejudices about the issue as to whether to undertake a bad situation or try to ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 353, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...is superior to accept current situation.I write up my own opinion about two oppos...
^
Line 2, column 64, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Besides
...situation have a disadvantageous impact.Besides, there has also very practical merits.A...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...s, there has also very practical merits.A society that fraught with all of danger...
^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...budget into things that value of them. On the other hand, I would completely si...
^^
Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...ng it with feasible impacts. There have several reason for me to recognize with this notion. F...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... improve economy or investment sector. By these radical aforementioned ideas, I...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, as to, for instance, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0900621118 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.080371208 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0202216943 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.076923077 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211535087957 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643648813758 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492298634257 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126619914088 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301188886294 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.