The ecosystem plays a vital role in our society. The impact of human activities on the natural environment is causing the disappearance of numerous animals and plants. The problem is driven by many reasons which will be analysed in this essay before some measures are given.
First of all, people destroy the natural habitats of many species. To be more specific, people have cleared forests, drained wetlands and have many plans for constructing houses, buildings, resorts and modern facilities. As a result, the native trees are removed and many animals have lost their living space. Moreover, they have been leading to a loss of biodiversity. In order to tackle this problem, the government should implement stricter regulations for illegal deforestation. On the other hand, people should create national parks and wildlife reserves. Besides that, we should protect endangered animals and enable them to thrive.
Secondly, they have been also contributing to climate change and pollution. In fact, people have burned fossil fuels by using private vehicles. Additionally, many manufacturing plants have released toxic gas into the atmosphere. Therefore, these have only led to an increase in the level of greenhouse gases but these have also caused the Earth to warm up. Furthermore, these have also made it difficult for some species to survive. In order to address this problem, the government should encourage people to use public transport, reduce the amount of carbon dioxide by investing in renewable energy sources and have a better waste treating system.
Inclusion, This is a complicated problem caused by many factors. However, these above measures should be considered to reserve this situation.
- The influence of human beings on the world s ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity What are the primary causes of the loss of biodiversity What solutions can you suggest 11
- In education and employment some people work harder than others Why do some people work harder Is it always a good thing to work hard 64
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in fact, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4606741573 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82213155068 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629213483146 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5331709835 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.125 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0616743023874 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0220743015397 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0238268645076 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0458997118878 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216792775295 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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