It is said that there has been an upward trend in the percentage of crime rates committed by youngsters who reside in urban areas around the world recently. This phenomenon is caused by many reasons and several measures can be taken to tackle the problem given above.
Several reasons can explain why commiting crimes has become so popular to teenagers and these causes may trigger negative impacts on the economy. A soar in population can be regarded as one of the main causes, which is followed by unemployment and famines. When individuals are penniless, they will lose their dignity to steal food and property of others. Secondly, parents have various manners to educate their children, so if a person lives in a supportive environment, he or she may have no tendency of commiting crimes. The last one is perception of each individual and how he or she face up to an issue. Some people choose being a robber while there are loads of occupations having the standard that is appropriate to them.
However, there are various workable solutions that governments can take to deal with the problem. The initial solution is reducing the soar in population, with each family having two children only. Another way is conveying powerful messages against criminal actions in order to raise the awareness of citizens, especially people with young age. Last but not least, government’s regime is vital, and each authority should enact laws about crime and give harsh punishment to any person or organization that break the laws.
In conclusion, the rise in teenager crime rate is a result of many factors and there are a variety of ways to alleviate this trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94982078853 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68425999693 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6180726612 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.230769231 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148168782099 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044936372201 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305774010228 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845596759319 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185168078013 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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