The diagram below shows the manufacturing process of making sugar from sugar cane(cây mía)
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates the manufacturing process of making sugar from sugar cane.
Overall, it can be seen that there are 7 steps in this procedure which can be divided into 2 main stages, beginning with growing sugar canes for 12-18 months and ending with drying and cooling the sugar.
At the first step of the progress, the sugar canes are planted and grown for 12 to 18 months. After that, they can be harvested from two ways: the farmer will cut down the sugar canes by a sickle or a special tractor will cut them down and collect them. By both ways, the collected sugar canes will be delivered into a special machine and it will crush the collected sugar canes and turn them into juice.
Afterwards, the juice from the crushing machine will be poured into a limestone filter in order to purify it. Following this, the purified juice will be heated in a evaporator and the purified juice after that will become syrup. Subsequently, a centrifuge will be used in order to separate sugar crystals from syrup. Finally, sugar will be put in a huge container to dry and cool.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 163, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s, the purified juice will be heated in a evaporator and the purified juice after...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63212435233 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35750725957 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549222797927 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5195922814 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220309686515 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125287190057 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137958475775 0.0843802449381 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206363178611 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.171602565909 0.0819641961636 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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