The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The provided line graph below sketches out how many travellers pay a visit to a particular Caribbean island during the period from 2010 to 2017.
Overall, there was an upward trend in the total number of visitors coming to Caribbean, which was the consequence of the rise in the people staying on different destinations: cruise ships and island.
It can be seen from the chart that individuals staying on cruise ships started at merely 0.25 millions in the first year, after which it rose slightly to 0.5 millions in 2011 before falling to the initial figure in 2012. From 2012 onwards, travellers visiting Caribbean staying on cruise ships rocketed from approximately 0.25 millions to 2 millions in 2017.
On the contrary, the number of visitors to Caribbean island and stay here leveled out during the first 2 years, at 0.75 millions. This figure continued to grow gradually until it reach a peak at 1.5 millions and then remained unchanged from 2013 to 2015. Meanwhile, visitors staying on island was higher than that staying on cruise ships during the period of 2010 and 2015, but in 2016, this data is surpassed by its counterpart.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, then, while, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9170984456 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58233892459 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564766839378 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.5973928474 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.571428571 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5714285714 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137479362249 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764690083662 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768838888274 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107019659906 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810693772892 0.0819641961636 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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