Schools, colleges and universities should ask students to evaluate their teacher, do you agree or disagree
we can agree that tourism is growing rapidly with endliess potentials, but despite that there are still many problems of tourism industry which badly affected individuals and society. firstly, tourism can cause damages to the environment. In order to develop tourism, many places have been cutting down trees, taking lands of local people to build facilities. even though ecotourism is being developed to solve this problem, the cost and resources for ecotourism might even be more expensive then the normal tourism we know. Secondly, many toursits may get seduces to crimes, drugs, gamblings or even sexual matters. In US, that many vsitors spend all their days in casinos is not unfamiliar things to see. Thirdly, the cultures and traditions of many places may cause arguments among people. For example, if you show your disrepesct to cows in India, you might get into huge trouble or if you joke or insult about the presidents of countries such as Vietnam, intentionally or not, you will be taken to jail or be fined with not so small amount of money and get departed out of the country. In con clusion, problems in tourism are unlikely to avoid but we can seduced the chances of getting into troubles by respecting the cultures of each countries we visit and governments should also support their local tourism more positively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
we can agree that tourism is growing rapid...
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Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
...badly affected individuals and society. firstly, tourism can cause damages to the envir...
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Line 1, column 361, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
...ds of local people to build facilities. even though ecotourism is being developed to...
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Line 1, column 493, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...ecotourism might even be more expensive then the normal tourism we know. Secondly, m...
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Line 1, column 634, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or even sexual matters. In US, that many vsitors spend all their days in casinos ...
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Line 1, column 1016, Rule ID: BE_FINED_WITH[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fine'?
Suggestion: fine
...or not, you will be taken to jail or be fined with not so small amount of money and g...
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Line 1, column 1162, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'seduce'
Suggestion: seduce
...ourism are unlikely to avoid but we can seduced the chances of getting into troubles by...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9730941704 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.556832546 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641255605381 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.260437456 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.222222222 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7777777778 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8888888889 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0688178699822 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0233392011756 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290004991692 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688178699822 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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