You experienced an incident on public transport that caused you distress. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company.
In your letter
▪ describe the incident
▪ explain how this incident affected you
▪ suggest what could be done about it
Dear Sir,
I am Barkavi, and I had travelled on you bus a week ago. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction on the incident that happened on your bus while travelling.
On 1st May 2023, I was waiting at the Singanallur bus stand to board Dindigul route bus. Though there were several bus, all of them were extremely crowded, due to the fact that following day was Pongal. As I could not find any direct bus, I tried to get inside one of your bus that passes through Dindigul, but the conductor did not allow me to enter. Instead, he asked me to get a full ticket to Madurai if not i cannot travel in the bus. This action of him was very disrespectful and had spoiled the excitement of going back home for a festival. I tried to argue with him but ended up getting a full ticket to Madurai.
I would strongly suggest that you install CCTV camera in all your buses, so that you can look back to it when ever there is an incident. Henceforth, I would really appreciate if you could investigate more into this issue and take immediate action on this person and also need to make sure that this incident does not happen again.
Looking forward to your immediate action on this problem.
Yours Sincerely,
Barkavi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun bus seems to be countable; consider using: 'several buses', 'several busses'.
Suggestion: several buses; several busses
...d Dindigul route bus. Though there were several bus, all of them were extremely crowded, du...
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Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... to get a full ticket to Madurai if not i cannot travel in the bus. This action o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49380546675 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619469026549 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0002422474 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.75 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180118486471 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628146677913 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687403934682 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125946801713 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887851479071 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.