The bar chart gives information on the figures for students in thousand who had a choice subjects of university in 2005. The chart groups the students according to subjects and divides these subject groups into Males and females. There was a huge difference in choices between Males and Females.
The number of boys’ choices ranged from the highest the number of just over 20 thousand to the lowest just approximately 2 thousand. More boys had a choice in Science than Females and the former was over 20 thousand which was twofold than the latter. Mathematics, literature, and law were more attractive to boys than girls. By contrast, language and the arts were chosen by only around 2,5 thousand.
It was so impressive that the number of females who chose social science was nearly 25 thousand and higher than the highest number of males who chose science. There was a big difference between Males and Females in language choice. The female’s choice was ninth as more as the male choice. Humanities were chosen by the same figure for boys and girls.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...ormation on the figures for students in thousand who had a choice subjects of university...
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Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
.... The female’s choice was ninth as more as the male choice. Humanities were chosen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88333333333 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50216572859 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494444444444 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3786992526 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9090909091 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 5.23603664747 10% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110402438468 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482068888636 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727217122759 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842299594588 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817925312234 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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