The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people belive that nowaday the only method to decrease the amount of traffic in cities is reducing the need for human to travel from home for work, education or shopping, but i can not agree with this view any more. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
At first, work, school and shopping are significant demand for the individuals, so goverment can not reduce in the easy way. Teenagers and adults who in the age for learnning and working have acount for almost the number of individuals in the wourld, so it can be said that there are no way for reducing the demand of them. Furthermore, students and adults have great influence to the development of social and their country by their contribution. traffic appear to support for these demand of human, so that goverment do not need to decrease the talent of their nation because of reducing the amount of traffic. For instance, nowaday in the developing social very children around the world need to have their own knowledge, strongth and experience thought the education to contribute their ability for the development of their country in the near future.
In addition, there are a plenty of way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities much better than reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping. For example, encouraging people to use more public transports like bus, train or tram. And also goverment need to pay money to invest more public transports in cities. One bus can capacity 30 people or more than that number. Moreover, people need to have their own awareness for using as less as transports they can.
To conclude, reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping is not a effective and appropriate method to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today, because this trend do not reality. goverment need to have a bright ideal to help their individual live more covinence and help their life better than before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...me for work, education or shopping, but i can not agree with this view any more. ...
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...ill analyse this statement in detail. At first, work, school and shopping are ...
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Suggestion: Traffic
...nd their country by their contribution. traffic appear to support for these demand of h...
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... of their country in the near future. In addition, there are a plenty of way t...
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Suggestion: than
...e their own awareness for using as less as transports they can. To conclude, r...
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...using as less as transports they can. To conclude, reducing the need for peopl...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... for work, education or shopping is not a effective and appropriate method to red...
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Suggestion: Goverment
...day, because this trend do not reality. goverment need to have a bright ideal to help the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81231671554 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50373943121 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463343108504 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9869507622 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.214285714 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.496867735776 0.244688304435 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191040656641 0.084324248473 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.197564076453 0.0667982634062 296% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.354455946461 0.151304729494 234% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556325365547 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.