Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is thought that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to decrease the amount of packaging of production, other people believe that customers should avoid using goods with plenty of packing. From my point of view, in some situation i mostly agree with the first notion because of its benefits and pratical for the resident life. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
first of all, in the industrialized world and with the appearence of modern technology that plastic bags have appeared more frequenly which lead numerous demerits affection for the society, so manufacturers and supermarkets's resposibility is greatly significant for the resident life. Not only will this phenomenon alter the weakness habits and behave of citizens which advance their mentality life and cognitive systerm, but also the health and immune systerm of adolesence can be improve gradually, reducing the propotion of death rate in their country. Furthermore, the creative and imagination abilities of teenagers can be increase which develop their economic background. To illustrate, there was a vurvey by Babite Bod, the famous interviewer and professor, which is expert about the sucess of european large companies which have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. The statictic demonstrated that nearly every business has got various achievement in their improvement.
However, we can not negate the drawback of this problem when compare with the second notion. The socioeconomic trouble will be widened where poorer individuals do not have enough abilities and knowledge to understand the dangerous of plastic. Morover, many goverment take advantage from this investment for their own revenue, harmful influence will be led by this action to the young generation.
To conclude, though my agrument from the essay, i totally agree with the strenths of manufacturers and supermarkets's alternative, but it still have some negative aspect for the society. The state need to have clear plans to improve their citizens fot the nation's development.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ill analyse this statement in detail. first of all, in the industrialized worl...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'demerits'' or 'demerit's'?
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...ared more frequenly which lead numerous demerits affection for the society, so manufactu...
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...ious achievement in their improvement. However, we can not negate the drawback ...
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... this action to the young generation. To conclude, though my agrument from the...
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...ay, i totally agree with the strenths of manufacturers and supermarketss alternat...
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
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...supermarketss alternative, but it still have some negative aspect for the society. T...
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Line 4, column 259, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...plans to improve their citizens fot the nations development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, still, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50778816199 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00892330129 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607476635514 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8350767165 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194854657466 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668873092272 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114812252327 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129324428214 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115571652513 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill analyse this statement in detail. first of all, in the industrialized worl...
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Line 2, column 3, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...l analyse this statement in detail. first of all, in the industrialized world and...
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Line 2, column 157, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'demerits'' or 'demerit's'?
Suggestion: demerits'; demerit's
...ared more frequenly which lead numerous demerits affection for the society, so manufactu...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ious achievement in their improvement. However, we can not negate the drawback ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... this action to the young generation. To conclude, though my agrument from the...
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Line 4, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ay, i totally agree with the strenths of manufacturers and supermarketss alternat...
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Line 4, column 147, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...supermarketss alternative, but it still have some negative aspect for the society. T...
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Line 4, column 259, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...plans to improve their citizens fot the nations development.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, still, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50778816199 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00892330129 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607476635514 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8350767165 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194854657466 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668873092272 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114812252327 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129324428214 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115571652513 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.