Technology causes more problems for modern society than it solves. Do you agree or disagree?
It is thought that new innovation have weakness affection more trouble for resident life than it solves. From my point of view, in some situation i mostly disagree with this notion because of technology's benefits for the society. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First of all, in the industrialized world and with the appearence of modern technology that the requirement of individual have increased gradually, so techonogy is grealy significant for the people habits. Not only will this phenomenon procide numerous academic knoweledge, soiall-exerienece, valuable information for the teenagers which improve the mentality life of adolesence, but also the socioeconomic problem can be narrowed with the connection where more relationship will be created by talent youngs. Furthermore, various dangerous acivities can be altered by new innovation such as automatic robots, advanced the economic background of their nation. To illustrate, there was a vurvey by Romery Tim, the famous interviewer and professor, which is expert about the sucess of postgraduate who can understand the strength of techolonogy. The statistic demonstrated that nearly everyone has got plenty of achievement in their career.
However, we can not negate the drawback of this problem for the people health. The propotion of unemployment and homeless people will be rose dramatically since a lot of individual have been replaced by genius innovation. Moreover, many government take advantage from this investment for their own revenue, harmful inflence will be led by this action to the young generation.
To conclude, though my agrument from the essay, i totally disagree with this statement, but modern technology still have some negative aspect for the children behave. The state need to have clear plans to improve their citizens for the country's development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55087719298 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08192039199 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624561403509 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9790955405 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.692307692 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161552498936 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567536584281 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535890328113 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108327806821 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386801453125 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.