Scientists and news media are presenting ever more evidence of climate change. Government cannot expect to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of the individuals to change their life style and prevent further damage what are your views?
Presently, global warming is one of the hottest issues of debate running all around the world. We should use all possible measures to tackle this global problem. In my perception, not only changes in individual life style, but also the government has go play a significant role in addressing this issue.
It is true that, individuals can contribute a lot in reducing the impact of global warming. Their small efforts like, reduce the use of personal vehicles, use of shared vehicles or public transport system, not only help to reduce the emission of harmful gases and pollution, but also lessen t...
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