Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is a strongly held in belief that the sportsmen and sportswomen get an enormous salary in their career path compares to others vital occupations such as scientists, surgeons, and other academic fields. Some people assume that this is an unfair treatment while others believe those successfully athletics deserve to have their justified salary.
On the one hand, not everybody is born with the natural talent to participate in these harsh sport competitions and not so many people are willing to be trained in tough conditions. For instance, in order to compete in tournaments such as the Olympics or World Cup requiring the sport players to practice consecutive times without breaks to build up their physical conditions, and in the real international competitions, these players, who represent the country sometimes risk their life to gain the victories as it can affect the nation’s reputation. Therefore, the more pressure and cautions they deal with, the more they are paid.
On the other hand, other occupations such as scientists, educators, and surgeons contribute more in social welfares in a long-term session. Thus, the amount of money that one makes should be paid equivalent to the service they provide to community. For instance, the doctor professionals, they are the one who work tirelessly to save precious lives. Similar to the teachers who are always devoted to impart their knowledge with the noble cause. Nevertheless, the payments they receive don’t reflect their actual contributions, that’s why there are some uproars extant.
In conclusion, every career regarding sport or others crucial should be paid base on their provision to the publicity, not being lopsided.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33085501859 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8963569384 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617100371747 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.2533665585 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.363636364 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180460341989 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660482070947 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649884943782 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106843049669 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533447662576 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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