Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's world, the controversial question of whether people should live in one place all life or whether should change it has sparked intense debate. While some argue that living in one place is more agreeable, I strongly agree with the statement that people should change their cities. This can be attributed to building a better relationship and also improving and completing the perspective. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to mind elucidating my standpoint is that changing the habitats and homes from one place to another will help people to improve and increase their soft skills. They learn how to be more flexible and overcome their life challenges. The new place brings new and different issues and experiences that people can improve their perspective and personality. Consider my own experience to make this point more clear. One of my friends that migrate to a new country, found a lot of issues at the first month after migration. She told me that she never met lives challenging before migration and living in a new country helped him to be more flexible and accept situations easily.
The second rational reason behind this opinion is rooted in the fact that living in different cities can help people to build better relationships and improve their communication skills. When people live in new places, they learn new cultures and manners that helped them to be more social. Additionally, it will help them to connect with different people around the world easily. They are able to talk about different notions cultures and life habitats. I can see that my friend on her social media platforms that have different friends from different nations and he started to exchange cultural beliefs with them.
In brief, due to the aforementioned reasons, I think changing living places is more beneficial for people to improve their personality and to increase their social circle that consists of different people with different notions. It is anticipated that having international connections will bring valuable opportunities to people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, while, i think, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78074428445 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522857142857 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7601064345 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.058823529 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5882352941 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41176470588 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153008513586 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521899897124 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484842404857 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100454426334 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513241431421 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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