The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent decades, we have been facing global environmental issues mainly caused by cars and other transportation. Under this circumstance, certain people widely believe that the most excellent solution to resolve this obstacle is the augmentation of costs fuel for cars and other vehicles. From my perspective, I strongly agree that it is the most ideal method up to the present time.
To begin with, if fuel prices increase, some people would be reluctant to use cars or private vehicles which means limiting the use of cars and motorbikes. In this manner, it allows for a significant reduction in the emissions that these vehicles discharge every day and at the same time improves the air quality of the environment. In addition, to avoid purchasing so much money for automobiles gas, people will tend to find other economical ways to move such as public transport more frequently.
Furthermore, fossil fuel can take millenniums to replenish and we are all aware it is running out and is also a natural limited energy source. Therefore, it is necessary to have further vision through more research and expanding exploitation of different sustainable energies that are also more environmentally friendly such as electronic power, wind power, or solar power. For instance, electronic cars are in development, and we can easily see more and more of them appearing all around the world nowadays.
In conclusion, fuel prices raised may help to minimize environmental pollution but besides that, we should give priority to swell renewable energy for long-term sustainable development in the course of time.
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- The best way to solve the world s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- The best way to solve the world s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2519379845 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99490031871 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639534883721 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.8659233777 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.5 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211816981542 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763446998294 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358391272957 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118277028312 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473611989827 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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