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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life.Others think that it is better to work for different organisations.Discuss both views and give your opinions.

In modern epoch,doing job at one workplace throughout their life.While few assume that it is good to do work with various organisations.I,strongly,agree with the latter view as one can become multicultural and masses can become experienced.

To begin with latter view,individuals can become multicultural by working with more organisations.When they work in different workplaces,they come in contact with different people which help them to learn many thing from their culture To illustrate,workers in the multinational companies are from all over the world who work at the same place and share their heritage and culture.In addition to this,masses can become more experienced by working in variouscompany.They learn different techniques and they gain more experience which will become them more talented. Resultantly,they develop their skills by working for various workplaces.So,why not people work for various companies if this helps them to become multicultural.

Now,discussing former view,Masses can get promotion .As individuals working with one organisation in full tenure period,they become habitual about the strategies of the companies Which further give them benefit by assigning higher rank in workplace.For instance,many workers of state bank of india spent their full job life at one place .By owing this they can get promotion easily.Moreover,they can maintain good relations with seniors throughout life.While doing job at one company in full working life,senior management become familiar to lower management which further improve their relations with each others.Eventually,they become good friends even after retirement.

To conclude,working at different places allot more job opportunities.Although maases become multicultural by doing job at various places yet doing job at one place gives promotion.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in addition, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.99236641221 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.12183346349 2.80592935109 147% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534351145038 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.2975951904 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 212.756762525 49.4020404114 431% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 314.0 106.682146367 294% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.4 20.7667163134 252% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251082654491 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157486314773 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697618254992 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147980489702 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078609982797 0.056905535591 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.0 13.0946893788 252% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.78 50.2224549098 4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 11.3001002004 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.35 12.4159519038 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.1190380762 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in addition, to begin with

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