The use of social media, e.g. Facebook and Twitter, is replacing face-to-face contact for many people in everyday life. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
It is said that the use of social media such as Facebook and Twitter, is replacing face to face interact for many people in everyday life. From my point of view, this notion have both benefits and drawbacks appropriate with each person or each situation. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
On the one hand, social media have made people's life more convenience, comfortable and wonderful. Some big companies or business have conference though social media for saving time and also many citizens choose for working at home on international companies. Furthermore, the individuals can be conneted with more international friend by internent such as facebook, twitter or snapchat. Not only can teenagers learn a plenty of new knowledge from their aboad friends, but also children can study and transmit their tradditional cutural to their friends. To illustrate, nowadays some students at universities nowadays which conbine with other universities in all around the world that teenagers can learn in their nation but they also get international certificate. In addition, social media will help people have more opprotunity for earning money, this trend will help social reduce the number of umemployment and homeless people.
On the other hand, the security of social media is not really high for people can save their important information. Bad people take advantage from some mistake of internet to do the terrible things, there are a lot of wrong information that did not confirmed by any professtional. Moreover, at some aspect social media make the distake between person and person more further. The individuals only concentrate in their virtual World and also when they do not do physical activity, they will lead some problem with their health.
To conclude, by my agrument from these essay social media have their own advantage and drawbacks appropriate with some person or each situation, so people need to have bright plan to use this in the significant way for their better life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20615384615 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76547437535 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3173053399 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.857142857 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296376951936 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116138400505 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146938059285 0.0667982634062 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209352664031 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101277151767 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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