Dear Deepen,
I am writing this letter to explain you regarding my latest trip to Goa. This place has ample amount of beauty in nature and some breathtaking views that are mesmerizing.
I got the opportunity to visit this place as I had one conference over there for 5 days .This is located on the border of Maharastra and Karnataka. It is surrounded by mountains as well as lots of beaches.
Along with that, some cathedrals and monuments are precious outings. One of the church was built in ancient times and still kept in very well condition. The authorities here claim that they posses body of one of the oldest priest. I was fortunate to gain knowledge about all these historic locations.
I want to suggest you that we should visit this place as early as possible. We will explore more beaches and of course night life in Goa is something you cannot forget. So we will definitely try to cherish our vacation.
Hoping for your positive answer.
Your friend,
Monali
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, still, well, as for, of course, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75438596491 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57691105243 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690058479532 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8992496805 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.5384615385 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1538461538 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279584521384 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791903822273 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806375354709 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115042181633 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687127256822 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.38 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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