Shopping is the favourite pastime for most of the young people. Why do you think it is that? Do you think they should be encouraged to do some other activities?
Considering the leisure activities, nowadays younger generations prefer to go shopping instead of other activities. There are numerous reasons for this situation, also in my opinion, I think young people ought to engage themselves in more innovative and recreational activities.
To commence with the most prominent reason why this situation happens because of advertisement. By this I mean that most of the people see a different advertisement which not only lures the population towards that product but also gives some amount of addiction to reiterate check the product when they find some free time. Moreover, online shopping also consists of an issue to attract more people to buy any product at the cheapest price. For example, the website of amazon.com offers people to buy products at an affordable price due to not involving any sub-agent between consumer and seller;hence, people can buy easily what they desire.
Examining the remedies for people to be more curious for other activities is to spread awareness between them to divert themselves to do more productive work. This is to say that the government promotes the sport activities by making various arenas in any particular local area give the people enthusiasm to go and play at that place. To add to this, some amount of funds also encourage people to do more work in their field which gives them more relaxation and people may engage towards their field.
To recapitulate, although there are various reasons such as advertising such products and cheapest version available in the market, my argument such as awareness and give some special infrastructure for people which help them to flourish their own self is an appropriate way to deal with the situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, thus, for example, i mean, i think, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18505338078 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83113475849 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55871886121 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.8101202213 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.7 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218742498451 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849057991919 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050017111958 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117786626128 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536785206821 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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