Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure
that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that
government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own
position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and
supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Arts,modes of expression that use skill and imagination in creation of an aesthetic objects which represent the environments, society and culture, includes painting, sculpture, music, theathre and etc.
I mostly believe this arts can be flourished if enough financial backup can be available. And if the authority is government, then it will become very easy for all artist to get the equal chance. Artist who actually create fantastic creation through his own imagination should be free from any hindrance : this can be financial or any types of pressure from any government or even any pressure of believes. All artist don’t think for the ony commercial purpose. So they can’t be motivated through the financial money. While the fact is if the government funding is available, artist could do anything in accordance to their choice.
Such as , a film-maker named Watson Devisky, became popular in South Korea after his death, who was thinking a movie that is not typical that why he could not manage production necessity. But when he passed away, a popular movie was made through his notes that made earlier. Even first animation movie maker do the work through the government funding, eventually big animation industry comes to the bright light. Besides, fine art’s students can create sculpture regardless of thinking about the selling concerns, so they can think with their very own imagination.
On the other hand, some critics believe that government funding of arts threatens the integrity of arts. They contend that when the government becomes a primary funding source, it may lead to influence over artistic creation. Artists may not feel freedom to conform to the government's expectations or produce work that aligns with political or social agendas, compromising their artistic freedom.
Both views have valid points to consider. Government funding can indeed provide stability and support for artists and organizations, allowing them to pursue their artistic endeavors and reach broader audiences. It can also help promote inclusivity and diversity in the arts. However, the concerns about government influence and potential limitations on artistic freedom should not be dismissed lightly.
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- Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts Write a response in which you d 70
- Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts Write a response in which you d 83
- Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts Write a response in which you d 66
- Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts Write a response in which you d 66
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, then, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 345.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50724637681 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78602966876 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597101449275 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.4062814526 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.555555556 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24488728465 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811971851427 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114136275565 0.0758088955206 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124171545572 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847451861411 0.0667264976115 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.