In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations.
Nowadays, the average life expectancy is improving particularly in developed countries. In my opinion, governments are responsible for solving the negative impacts this trend can set on both individual and governmental levels.
As people start living longer, it can cause several problems for the host nation. To start with, there would be more elderly citizens of retirement age who are applicable for pensions. Therefore, the proportion of young adults becomes less, whom local authorities rely on for their job taxes. Moreover, this situation puts a burden not only on the national tax system but also on other facilities such as healthcare, accommodation, and senior care. Young people who have become breadwinners will also face difficulties to look after elderly family members and pay for medical bills.
There are a couple of measures governments need to take to reduce the impact of increased life expectancy. Firstly, the retirement age should be set older, perhaps from 60 to 65, as old people today are still healthy and energetic to work for a living. Countries with an aging population can address the financial problems by encouraging immigration, therefore receiving more employees and businesses which fund the national tax. Finally, public services such as transportation, accommodation, and healthcare should be improved for old citizens.
In conclusion, people will continue having long and healthy lives because of revolutionized healthcare technologies and improved living standards. Although this can be a pressing concern for individuals and society, I believe systematic planning and some changes for national finance by the government can take over any negative impact.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62162162162 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06077534806 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660231660232 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7832898674 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276072546015 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912445400662 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553451687566 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162285446527 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034591945716 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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