Today, many people do not know their relative. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?
It is agrue that nowadays many individuals do not know their relative. The following essay will discuss the reasons behind this phenomenon and then offer some solutions to tackle the problem.
First of all, in the international world and with the appearance the internet or modern technology. Not only will the individuals have less opportunity for gathering their relative, but also the new innovation is account for most of time in the citizens life such as smart phone, computer and television. Furthermore, as a fact of modern life, there are numerous of teenagers who study aboad to develop their career, getting more sucessful, academic knowledge and achivement, so this will be too difficul for adolesence to know all of their relative. To illustrate, there was a interested statistic by Cavanho, the famous scientist professtional, which is about the percentage of teenagers in London who know their relative. The number of children do not know their relative is account for nearly everyone in the statistic.
In spite of its dangerous, government do not have any campain to address this phenomenon. However, with each person, the free time can be spent by individuals for visitting their relative, narrowing their distance and also it create a advantage habit for the youngs generation, leaving away from evil social. Moreover, an aboad student can come back to their country to contribute their ability for the development of nation.
To conclude, i believe this problem can stem from developed technology and studied aboad, but this trend can be improved by awareness and patiently of each person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, such as, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86481408879 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607692307692 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0250829304 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.909090909 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262838102588 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105590361192 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060792909604 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17731097581 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283603100717 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.