Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believes that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
While one school of thought holds that the best route to gain successful career is studying at university or college, others are of the opinion that getting a job after school is better. This essay will closely examine both views before concluding that I agree with the former.
On the one hand, it is understandable why some people assume that students should get a job after school. The key rationale behind their belief is that not everyone has the capacity to enroll in a university or college. Some students whose financial conditions could not afford for tuition as well as the expenditure on necessary demand are inclined not to pursue an academic program. It is also noteworthy that some would be not knowledgeable and not have enough aptitude to study at university or college. The only way for them to make ends meet is by applying for a job. Considering these factors, the idea of getting a job seems perfectly justifiable
On the other hand, I side with those who say that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career. Perhaps the most foremost reason is that several occupations require qualification as well as experience in a particular field. Take doctors as for example, those pursue this academic career would have to major in studying and practicing at university in order to have a bachelor’ degree before being an actual expert doctor. The argument in favour of enrolling in university and college is further fortified by the fact that those owning a bachelor’ degree would gain more opportunities to get promotion in their work and salaries are commensurate with experience and skills compared to those who do not pursue academic study.
In conclusion, while there are justifications for advocating getting a job after school is better, I would argue that the best route to gain successful career is studying at university or college
- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career while others believes that it is better to get a job straight after school Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career while others believes that it is better to get a job straight after school Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, while, as for, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95911949686 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82821209805 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506289308176 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.9991181596 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.416666667 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381268895714 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144812318153 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153367424989 0.0667982634062 230% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287318125477 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123676179521 0.056905535591 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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