Nowadays , many zoos were built in the world.This bring a lot of benefits to human for entertaining. On the contrary , some people think that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos.
On the one hand , animals are kept in zoos have several advantages.Firstly,they can prevent from disasters. Thus , many rare animals in the world are preserved to avoid to dissappearing. For instance , pandas are one of the most rare animals so people should take care them carefully . Secondly , animals in the zoos provide a lot of informations to people who are studying or researching . This save lots of time and money for people.
On the other hand , from my perspective , it is unecessary to keep animals in zoos . To begin with , animals ccannot live in natural habitats where they have freedom to do whatever they want . Living in the zoos has a bad impact on animals . For example , animals have lost their ability to survive or hunting . Furthermore , to be honest , in my view , animals are kept in zoos for only economy purpose . To be specific , visitors have to pay money to come in zoo to see the animals and it brings benefit to owner. Some zoos provide animals with dirty foods and water . This is one of the main factors which cause animals die because of disease .
In my conclusion , animals are kept in zoos also has some advantages , but it is unecessary . Personally , people do not need to catch animals and keep them in zoos which have more bad than good
- Do you think it is better for students to work before their university study Why Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice 58
- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide CO2 emissions per person in the United Kindom Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important Discuss both views 56
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...o keep animals in zoos. On the one hand , animals are kept in zoos have several a...
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...o people should take care them carefully . Secondly , animals in the zoos provide ...
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...o people who are studying or researching . This save lots of time and money for pe...
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...it is unecessary to keep animals in zoos . To begin with , animals ccannot live in...
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... to keep animals in zoos . To begin with , animals ccannot live in natural habitat...
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...ey have freedom to do whatever they want . Living in the zoos has a bad impact on ...
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... in the zoos has a bad impact on animals . For example , animals have lost their a...
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...as a bad impact on animals . For example , animals have lost their ability to surv...
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...lost their ability to survive or hunting . Furthermore , to be honest , in my view...
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...lity to survive or hunting . Furthermore , to be honest , in my view , animals are...
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... Furthermore , to be honest , in my view , animals are kept in zoos for only econ...
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...e honest , in my view , animals are kept in zoos for only economy purpose . To be...
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...or only economy purpose . To be specific , visitors have to pay money to come in z...
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...ovide animals with dirty foods and water . This is one of the main factors which c...
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...ich cause animals die because of disease . In my conclusion , animals are kept in...
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...re kept in zoos also has some advantages , but it is unecessary . Personally , peo...
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...s some advantages , but it is unecessary . Personally , people do not need to catc...
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...ages , but it is unecessary . Personally , people do not need to catch animals and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in fact, in my view, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65748031496 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74088821014 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527559055118 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.4802208574 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.5882352941 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9411764706 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.94117647059 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297753535993 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116144890271 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806915251877 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208842784254 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389752074604 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Nowadays , many zoos were built in the world.This ...
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Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...ays , many zoos were built in the world.This bring a lot of benefits to human for en...
^^^^
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... human for entertaining. On the contrary , some people think that it is wrong to k...
^^
Line 2, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o keep animals in zoos. On the one hand , animals are kept in zoos have several a...
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Line 2, column 67, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
...re kept in zoos have several advantages.Firstly,they can prevent from disasters. Thus ,...
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Line 2, column 74, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
... in zoos have several advantages.Firstly,they can prevent from disasters. Thus , many...
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Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ly,they can prevent from disasters. Thus , many rare animals in the world are pres...
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Line 2, column 199, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... to avoid to dissappearing. For instance , pandas are one of the most rare animals...
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Line 2, column 283, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...o people should take care them carefully . Secondly , animals in the zoos provide ...
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Line 2, column 294, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ould take care them carefully . Secondly , animals in the zoos provide a lot of in...
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Line 2, column 388, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...o people who are studying or researching . This save lots of time and money for pe...
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Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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...and money for people. On the other hand , from my perspective , it is unecessary ...
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... On the other hand , from my perspective , it is unecessary to keep animals in zoo...
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Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...it is unecessary to keep animals in zoos . To begin with , animals ccannot live in...
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... to keep animals in zoos . To begin with , animals ccannot live in natural habitat...
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Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ey have freedom to do whatever they want . Living in the zoos has a bad impact on ...
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Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... in the zoos has a bad impact on animals . For example , animals have lost their a...
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Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...as a bad impact on animals . For example , animals have lost their ability to surv...
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Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...lost their ability to survive or hunting . Furthermore , to be honest , in my view...
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Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lity to survive or hunting . Furthermore , to be honest , in my view , animals are...
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Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
... or hunting . Furthermore , to be honest , in my view , animals are kept in zoos ...
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Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... Furthermore , to be honest , in my view , animals are kept in zoos for only econ...
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Suggestion:
...e honest , in my view , animals are kept in zoos for only economy purpose . To be...
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Suggestion: .
...e kept in zoos for only economy purpose . To be specific , visitors have to pay m...
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...or only economy purpose . To be specific , visitors have to pay money to come in z...
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Line 3, column 569, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...ovide animals with dirty foods and water . This is one of the main factors which c...
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Line 3, column 646, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ich cause animals die because of disease . In my conclusion , animals are kept in...
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...e because of disease . In my conclusion , animals are kept in zoos also has some ...
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Line 4, column 69, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...re kept in zoos also has some advantages , but it is unecessary . Personally , peo...
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Line 4, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...s some advantages , but it is unecessary . Personally , people do not need to catc...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ages , but it is unecessary . Personally , people do not need to catch animals and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in fact, in my view, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65748031496 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74088821014 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527559055118 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.4802208574 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.5882352941 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9411764706 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.94117647059 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297753535993 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116144890271 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806915251877 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208842784254 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389752074604 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.