The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income To what extent do you agree or disagree

How to choosing a appreciate work is a general problem for so many teenagers nowaday. Some of those suppose that high paying job is the best choice when picking any career or work. From my personal standpoint, I do not go with the opinion and this essay would clarify the reasons.

To begin with, the criteria to select a job should be appreciaion. Every job would have the salary corresponding to the effort you put in. Therefore, if you are a low-level person, it is impossible to have a six-number-paying job. On the contrary, if you want to pick a good-salary work, you will have to put in more effort than others. It is rule of life: the more income you earn, the more endeavor you put in. When you choose a job suitable for yourself, your career path will be more advantageous and your life quality will be leveled up.

Next, having thought about a high salary career would make people get cheated easily. According to recent research, approximately 30 percent of scam victims believe in the advertisements for good-salary works. The crimes always use the ways to entice people with many ridiculous advertisements such as typing text on computer and having ten thousand dollars a month or surfing the web and be paid a thousand dollars for an hour. As a result, people who desire to have a career with high wage will be trapped.

To conclude, deciding on a work requires careful consideration and I believe the appreciation is the most vital criteria because of aforementioned reasons.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
How to choosing a appreciate work is a general problem fo...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
How to choosing a appreciate work is a general problem for so many t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, such as, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77307692308 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88338178751 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2548580121 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6428571429 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265700403193 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890334965179 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538301765608 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134217773225 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548518488048 0.056905535591 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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