Around the world, people are now living longer than ever before in the past. Some say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Others believe there are benefits to society having more elderly people.
To what extent do the advantages of possessing an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?
Individuals survive more years nowadays in comparison of past few decades. It is often argued that government cope with many hassles as people live longer while there are more advantages of having older people around the world. This essay will argue that merits of this outweighs the drawbacks. The essay will firstly demonstrates that they possesses more experience in every work field, and moreover, they are able to teach social and moral values to young ones more precisely than adults of today, followed by having an analysis of the argued disadvantage of funding provided by government to the older people.
To begin with, there are number of advantages of aging population in the world. Firstly older people require precise in knowledge and good experience in every field of workspace. Although, they did struggle in the life to find solution of different problems they faced in their life because of which they can give better advise to other tackling with the same problems today. For instance, in many work places in different countries, the management of multi-national companies train their fresher workers in the guidance of aged workers only because of their experience. Secondly; older people can accurately teaches social and moral values to the young ones. In this modern era, both the parents are working they do not have enough time to teach their offsprings. This can be overcome by their grandparents as they are able to guide young ones in a well manner.
Those opposed to it say that it become a blunder for authority having more older people because Government have to pay more funding to those in terms of pansion and in providing free medication to aged people. Despite this, some old ones who have good physical health and have responsibilities of their family, they want jobs to fullfill their needs. It will become difficult for government to give them employment. To examplify, many companies have more old workers then young ones this results into unemployment for adults.
In conclusion, being experienced in jobs and require more knowledge to teach social-moral values, such benefits outweighs the flawed argument that it is a disaster of having more older population for government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: demonstrate
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Message: Use only 'older' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: older
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Message: Use only 'older' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
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...rgument that it is a disaster of having more older population for government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13223140496 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67548288789 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504132231405 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.6376354488 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.4375 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6875 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248801642251 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849011179303 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748642212689 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155007345509 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415120916107 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.