In some countries today, people are having their first child when they are older. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
It is thought that in some countries today, individuals are having their teenagera when they are older. From my point of view, this notion have both benefits and drawbacks with each person and each situation. The following essay will analyse this statement indetail.
First of all, in the international world and with the appearence of modern technology individuals are just concentrate in their occupation, so some people are having their first child when they are older. Not only will this problem have bad influence for the health, lacking their immune, but also numerous dangerous disaster can be affected by the citizen such as ovarian disorder. Furthermore, the mentality and abilities of their adolesencen can not campare with the nomal teenagers. To illustrate, there was a survey by Tomcruid, the famous scientist and professor which about the success of yongs in New York who borned when their parent are older. The statistic showed that nearly everyone has got a various of mistake and trouble in their career.
On the other hand, we can not negate the positive aspect of this trend for the individual life. The citizen will be more attention to advanced their occupation, and also the nation development can be contributed by their talent. Morover, individuals will have more time for coping with the diffical problem and challenges.
To conclude, by my agrument from the essay this statement have its own strength and demerts appropriate with each person and each occupation, so parent need to have clear plans to improve their children for the nation improvement.
- The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban rural and town between 1995 and 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature 67
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below Leisure time in a typical week in hour by sex and employment status 19 67
- Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies factories and their employees to the countryside Do you agree or disagree 52
- Reporting of crimes and other kinds of violent news on television and in newspapers can have adverse consquences This kind of information should be restricted from being shown in the media To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11538461538 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67882337502 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565384615385 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7050293363 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.833333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333761968171 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120985035518 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940970692365 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202017410866 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735709429902 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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