Social media such as Facebook, Twitter is replacing face-to-face contact in people's everyday lives. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In the light of the prevalence of technologies, some social platforms such as Fb, Ins make in-person contact no longer necessary. While this development mays have some drawbacks, I believe the benefits that it brings are far greater than the downsides it has.
On the one hand, the popularity of social networks is disadvantageous to some certain extent. As the lack interaction and self obsessive passion, some people, especially teenagers today are becoming more rely on technical devices. Take Vietnamese for example, when hanging out with friends to the cafeteria, they prefer sticking their eyes to phones instead of chatting with their friends and thus can lead to the decrease of the sympathy and their friendship. This is a clearly testament to how social media can affect the indifference on others.
On the other hand, Iam of the opinion that there are more merits while people choose to use the social networks more. Due to the rise of the online networks, people have made the distance between people becoming closer. This is because social media and other online communication forms have made it much easier to contact people everywhere they live. For instance, overseas students still can make a video call to their friends or family even if they are living in another country, with the aid of online platforms which save more time and costs.
In addition, online networks also provide a place for people to share interests to keep the connection. It is noticeable that there are multiple groups in Facebooks or Instagram for those who love cats, films, or groups for volunteers, clubs,…which can hold discussion and explore deeper in that themes. This goes to show that besides its drawbacks, social media still have a mean in connection people to get closer.
In a nutshell, the development of social platforms may have some demerits, however in my point of view, the advantages of these proliferation outweigh the downsides they have.
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| 2023-07-03 | Janny Nguyễn | 73 | view |
| 2023-07-03 | Janny Nguyễn | 73 | view |
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- Social media such as Facebook Twitter is replacing face to face contact in people s everyday lives Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You used an adverb ('clearly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('testament') instead of another adjective.
... sympathy and their friendship. This is a clearly testament to how social media can affect the indi...
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Suggestion: , …
..., films, or groups for volunteers, clubs,…which can hold discussion and explore de...
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Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this proliferation' or 'these proliferations'?
Suggestion: this proliferation; these proliferations
... in my point of view, the advantages of these proliferation outweigh the downsides they have.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, may, so, still, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06811145511 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72561191446 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557275541796 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.709029777 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.928571429 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18633032108 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06824381724 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509237309934 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100265145725 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221120553145 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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