important characteristics of friend
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- some people believe that the high school should teach music and art as other basic science. some think that it is not necessary. what is your opinion? 70
- tpo 4 task 4 60
- describe the feature of your city which you consider is interesting 70
- do you think it is better to marry before or after the age of 30? 80
- Some people believe that life should be lived in the moment, and tomorrow is not guaranteed. Others believe that planning a future and focusing on tomorrow is a better approach to life. Which do you agree with and why? 80
Comments
did i use three specific
did i use three specific examples... here i think i have used two. does second reason consider with example?? please guide me
Well, because you used 'like'
Well, because you used 'like', so we consider it as an example. Let's review how we argue the reasons:
First, reason 1 (1 sentence) + why reason 1 (some arguments. 1-2 sentence) + a small conclusion for reason 1(like advantages of reason 1 or comparisons if not reason 1, 1-2 sentence). // about 15 seconds
Second, reason 2 (1 sentence) + why reason 2 (some arguments. 1-2 sentence) + a small conclusion for reason 2(like advantages of reason 2 or comparisons if not reason 2, 1-2 sentence). // about 15 seconds
Conclusion: Don't need a conclusion. (you can have one only when you don't have something to talk about)
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An example (Eating at home or restaurant) for First:
First,reason 1 (1 sentence: Eating at home can save money) + why reason 1(some arguments. 1-2 sentences: I can prepare cheaper food from food market; I don't need to drive or take a bus to reach the restaurant;) + small conclusions ( 1-2 sentences: with the money I saved, I can buy a good book to read; I can use the money for a trip...).
So if I use three reasons...
So if I use three reasons... Better not to give example in each reason?
Yes, better to talk generally
Yes, better to talk generally when you have more reasons.
22 in 30
Lack of fluency
Don't use three specific examples.
'one of my friends' not 'one of my friend'