In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smartphones, more and more people are starting to work from home.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
With the advancements in technology, working remotely has given rise among workers, without commuting to their workplaces. While this change can be advantageous in some ways, the drawbacks caused by this are not negligible as well.
To begin with the advantages, flexible working hours and saving money are the major ones. Regarding the former, those who work from home can set their working hours depending on their preferences, and other tasks they should do at home. In contrast, in workplaces employees usually need to stay and do their jobs based on the schedule given to them. As a result, time sometimes lacks when the workers need to spend on some crucial activities, such as pursuing hobbies or raising the children properly, if they have any. As for the latter, it is transport fare that can cost a lot if a workplace is far from home. By working online, that amount of money can be directed to other essential things, purchasing something to meet needs, for example. Thus, working remotely can be of great benefit in these cases.
However, this trend also causes several issues, one of which is lacking socializing skills. When people work from home, they might interact with their colleagues less, which can lead to isolation and limited networking opportunities. Without the ability to connect with others effectively, individuals may feel left out, misunderstood, or disconnected from the world around them. Secondly, this trend may cause health ailments. The more time workers sit in front of the computer screen, the worse their health becomes, meaning the ray computers produce harms their eyesight, and may lead to regular headaches. Therefore, these negatives should not be ignored when working online.
In conclusion, despite some benefits in terms of flexible working hours and money-saving, this transition can also bring some issues, such as socializing and health problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as for, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23202614379 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71742391888 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598039215686 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4397780642 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0625 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6875 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232518081831 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729946112194 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512520385196 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133752072621 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502659657262 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.