It is essential that our education system forces students to study very hard to have a successful and productive future life with workplace. That is the reason why some parents make some strict rules for their children and give time for their to do some sports activities , so I totally disagree with this.
First of all, playing sports can help school-age children relax from their hard studies. Playing like football, basketball, or swimming... can reduce their stresses, sitting and focusing on academic subjects all day. For ex, I liked to go to play badminton after my serious school classes every weekend, and I could hold the rest of the hard-study week.
Secondly, students ' physical health is also one of the most important reasons why they need to play sports because it can lead them to become strong, so they are ready for studying and can learn more things effectively. For instance, students who usually play
Sports , will be strong and have lots of energy more than students who do not play. Subsequently, they have more ability to study hard and never get sick.
In conclusion, according to the advantages of playing sports get a good chance in improving livelihood and getting better mental and physical health, I strongly agree that sports is as important as studying classroom, and should not be considered as wasted time activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03097345133 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61021665655 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632743362832 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5684610007 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.7 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170290728452 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649402147498 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478944764474 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954758266196 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431894032708 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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