It is common that people have difficulty in achieving a work-life balance. There are several causes of this widespread trend, but measures could certainly be taken to tackle the problem.
There are two main reasons why many people have trouble balancing work with other parts of their lives. Firstly, they are probably working longer hours than before due to the changes in work patterns. With the development of electronic devices, it is possible for people to work at home. They may have to deal with tasks at home hours if their leaders ask them about their work beyond regular working time. As a result, there is less time left for them to enjoy other parts of their lives. Secondly, there is fierce competition in almost all works of life as a consequence of the increase in population. Employees have to pay more attention to improving job performance in order to get promotion. This intensive competition takes up a lot of time and effort, leaving people with low energy for other parts of their lives.
There are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems described above. Firstly, a direct solution would be to impose laws about limiting working time to guarantee sufficient time for working people to rest. They can work more effectively in regular working hours after enough recreation in their spare time. A second measure would be for governments to encourage enterprises to create more jobs to relieve the employment pressure. In this way, it would be easier for employees to improve job security so they can save much more energy for their personal lives.
In conclusion, it is clear there are various reasons for people’s failure to strike a balance between work and life, and steps need to be taken to tackle this problem.
- The graph below show the value of clothing exported from Bangladesh between 1998 and 2012 and the pie chart shows the destinations and value of exported clothing in 2012 59
- The graph compares the percentage of theinternational and the percentage of UK student gaining second class degrees or better at a major UK university 67
- The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features
- the graphs show changes in the spending habits of people in the UK between 1971 and 2001 Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data 73
- The diagram shows the main systems of writing used throughout the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93311036789 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53310868991 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528428093645 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.0502169187 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.1875 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236562601113 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902747673771 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910371460213 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137613041182 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806752600379 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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