Music is undoubtedly a powerful tool when it comes to managing emotions and mental states. Many studies have shown that listening to music can lower cortisol levels, decrease blood pressure, and improve overall psychological well-being. In fact, music therapy is often used in hospitals and rehabs to alleviate pain and anxiety in patients recovering from surgery or dealing with chronic illnesses. Furthermore, research suggests that music activates different areas of the brain than speech alone, leading to unique effects on emotion regulation and cognitive processing.
However, the effectiveness of music in reducing stress and promoting relaxation varies greatly between individuals. Personal preference plays a significant role in determining whether music has a destressing effect. For example, someone who enjoys classical music might find Bach concertos very relaxing, whereas another person might find electronic dance music (EDM) more conducive to destressing. Moreover, external factors such as noise pollution, ambient temperature, and physical comfort also influence the effectiveness of music in promoting relaxation. If the environment is too loud or chaotic, music might not have the desired destressing effect.
In conclusion, while music can definitely aid in destressing and promoting relaxation, its effectiveness depends largely on individual preferences and environmental factors. Nonetheless, incorporating music into daily routines could potentially lead to improved mental health and reduced stress levels. Ultimately, everyone deserves to experiment with different genres and styles to discover what works best for them in terms of destressing and promoting relaxation.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, well, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.09166666667 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09245273026 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.704166666667 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.816749607 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.833333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140023856063 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055943946781 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449110365303 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093176958861 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235335274116 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.04 12.4159519038 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.21 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, well, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.09166666667 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09245273026 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.704166666667 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.816749607 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.833333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140023856063 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055943946781 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449110365303 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093176958861 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235335274116 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.04 12.4159519038 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.21 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.