Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Games are as important for adults as they are for children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Sports play a vital role in every individual’s life. The person who is involved in playing games is the one who knows the importance of it. Sports provide various advantages such as health benefits, increases productivity and create happiness. In my view, sports are as important for adults as for children.
Health is a major concern these days, sports play an important role in maintaining one’s health. Playing helps to improve the resistance of the body against various diseases. An individual who is more involved in sports is more healthier than the one sitting continuously in front o...
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Sports provide various advantages such as health benefits, increases productivity and create happiness.
Suggestion: Sports provide various advantages such as health benefits, increasing productivity and creating happiness.
Sentence: In conclusion, sports can can be played by adults also.
Description: The word can is not usually used as a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to can
Sentence: My wife is more close than earlier i.e before playing games, my kids understand me better and they feel that dad is not just a financer he is also understands and involves in various activities and can share many of the things with them.
Error: financer Suggestion: ?
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 377 350
No. of Characters: 1845 1500
No. of Different Words: 215 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.406 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.894 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.732 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 139 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 104 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 69 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.708 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.658 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.25 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.27 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.472 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.056 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5