Independent TOEFL essay - TPO 5: Agree or disagree : People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment - Doing things they like to do - rather than doing things they should do.
The way one acts in his workplace and social life plays a decisive role in every individual's improvement in their life and profession. This brings up a controversial question: Do people spend their time as they have to or as they enjoy? In this regard, some people are inclined toward the opinion that they spare their time to enjoy it whereas others hold the opposite perspective. The way I see it, people are dealing with a busier and more competitive lifestyle nowadays, which leaves no more time to spare on personal enjoyments. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on my reasons f...
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Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
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No. of Sentences: 30 15
No. of Words: 498 350
No. of Characters: 2279 1500
No. of Different Words: 242 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.724 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.576 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.543 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 66 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 50 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.596 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.263 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.441 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.102 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5