The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph illustrates the proportion of citizens between 1970 and 2020, also it predict that figure in 2030 and 2040 of Asian countries including Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia
Overall, the proportion of residents living in Malaysia was by far the most increasing figure over the period shown. In the meanwhile, citizens in Thailand provided the lowest percentage each year.
In 1970, it can be seen that 35% was the highest figure of citizen living in Philippines. The second placed for that proportion of Malaysia. Thirdty year later, the figure of Malaysia's population rose rapidly to 60% overtook that percentage of Philippines nearly 20 times, while it saw a sharply decline in figure of Phillipines's residents to 45%. In 2010, the proportion of citizens living in Malaysia rocketed significantly and reached a peek at nearly 90% at the end of the period. By contrast, the proportion of Philippines residents decreased slightly to 40% and restore back to 55% in 2024.
In 1970, there was a negligible proportion of citizens living in Thailand and Indonesia with just 19% and 12%, respectively. The upward trend to nearly 30% was saw in the proportion of residents in both countries thirdty years later. While the figure of Thailand's citizens increased substaintial and reached the second place with nearly 60%. In 2024, that percentage of of Thailand stayed stable until 2020 it rocketed to more than 40% in the end of the period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13389121339 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87561262153 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497907949791 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 356.4 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0827746408 43.030603864 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.545454545 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122227808342 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494363285382 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389012400437 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967298802872 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605687426522 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.