Studies show that many criminals have a low level of education. For this reason, people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison so they can get a job when leaving prison. Do you agree or disagree?
According to research, a significant number of prisoners have a low level of education. As a result, many people hold the belief that the reduction of the crime rate will be achieved effectively through educating prisoners for employment.I completely agree with this opinion.
Prison education must play a key role in improving the employability of prisoners and therefore making them less likely to be reincarcerated again. Firstly, By training prisoners for a job, It gives them the opportunity to broaden their knowledge with many novelties and acquire new skills which are essential for being qualified to work in the future. Thus, It can lift them out of poverty and unemployment, two common reasons for criminals' behavior to commit crime again. For example, a man named Stanley Richards, a former prisoner, was given the opportunity to enroll into classes that changed his life drastically and with that he became a taxpayer (“A College Education for Prisoners”).
Secondly, education of any kind in prison such as academic or vocational education helps the offenders to experience a more moral and meaningful life, helping them to understand the value of life. For instance, by helping others and dedicating their lives to society through their work can make the prisoners much more likely to rehabilitate and become a good citizen. Furthermore, educating prisoners for a job can bring them the opportunity to reintegrate into society and live in harmony with other people. For some formerly incarcerated individuals, they may struggle to communicate with others due to negative perceptions of them. However, by engaging in beneficial work, society may change its attitude towards them and recognize their effort and persistence. This recognition may help them feel acceptable and develop positive attitudes, replacing any negative intentions.
In conclusion, educating prisoners for employment can help them adapt to their new lives after leaving prison due to many benefits. This, in turn, is of use to prevent recidivism and make them a productive member of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39755351682 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00369643869 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587155963303 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3350761416 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.071428571 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292205577811 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108758729877 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701848225963 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207470006363 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587958207589 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.