Studies show that many criminals have a low level of education. For this reason, people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison so they can get
a job when leave prison. Do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary society, the more the cities develop , the higher the crime rate. It becomes a difficult issue that everyone has to face.There is a school of thought that the cause to explain this tendency derive from an inequality educational method and unemployed status.Therefore, a large number of residents suggest governments should train people who are imprisoned to create job opportunities for them when they are free. In my point of view, I suppose that this is an effective way but it is not the best one and I will analyze to clear my viewpoint in this essay.
On the one hand, there is an array of the merits of educating convicts which cannot be denied. First of all, these meaningful programs can make people who commit a crime and be punished aware of the meaning of our life. Initially, there are numerous reasons leading people to commit a crime. However, most of them cannot approach a primitive education in their childhood. Hence, they cannot compete with others to get well-paid jobs and earn their living. As a result, they are lured into social evils more easily than others, receiving imprisonment.If authorities provide an educational chance for them to learn about basic works, they can contribute themselves and be a good citizen when they are released from the prisons. Furthermore, it allows people who used to be out of law find a suitable career in order to reintegrate to society. Indeed, many prisoners are condoned because of their attitude and behaviors. Then, they return to their lives, earning money legally.
On the other hands, it is not the most ideal way to reduce the crime rate in my perspective since I support educating people in their early stage of life. It is clear to see that education for children is much more simple than the older. Moreover, it is better if more harsh laws are promulgated as people can catch up to heavy punishments to keep illegal thought at bay. By doing that, this negative rate in the future will lower than that in the present.
In conclusion, the statement that the best solution to minimize the crime rate is educating them in prison is not totally correct because there are various methods which can give a hand to prevent offense. As a person who wants to live in a healthy environment with no criminals, I think the government should consider which is the best to deal with this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, as to, i suppose, i think, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1965.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79268292683 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68664925013 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553658536585 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.6887012462 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.166666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30166817503 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829493411424 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402927444368 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169943276794 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323828287301 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.