The government should pay for the course fees for everyone who wants to study at university.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary society, there is a school of thought that authorities should pay full course fees for pupils who want to persuade higher education like universities. In my point of view, I completely agree with this view.
There are two reasons why I suppose it. Firstly, more students can make their dreams become true because they are provided enough conditions to do that. For instance, a survey on Vietnamese people illustrates that almost of them who did not go to the universities said that their families did not have enough money to pay for fees. Furthermore, if governments pay charge for students, they can encourage them to study. Hence, more people are educated to become more skilled. That will help to develop the economy, attracting male foreign investors.
Apart from the direct merits expressed above, I believe that it can bring numerous indirect benefits. First of all, it contributes to advance social quality since everyone can approach to high-quality education. It is reasonable that everyone can easily get well-paid jobs to earn their life and there will be no unemployed. In addition, criminal rate is expected to decline if people can study in university. These days, more countries such as Germany, Finland pay fees for both native and international students as an ideal method to improve residents' life.
In conclusion, for the advantages I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that governments should create opportunities for learner to go to universities. In the future, I think there will be more nations applying this solution to help their inhabitants as well as strengthen those countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, well, apart from, for instance, i suppose, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20075757576 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89330222638 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632575757576 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3808329222 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261759762863 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697302633926 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816493461345 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152527641547 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502998812442 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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