The table below gives information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in two cities in May 2007.
The tables depict a report of the temperature and hours of daylight in 2 cities which are Mumbai ( in Asia) and Moscow (in Europe) in May 2007. In general, Mumbai seemed to be warmer than Moscow. However, Moscow had higher numbers hours of daylight than Mumbai did.
It is clear to see the difference in the temperature between two cities. In Mumbai, the maximum temperature rose up to around 33 Celsius degree. On the other hands, the lowest temperature there dropped to 29 Celsius degree and remained for 3 last days of the week. On the contrary with Mumbai, Moscow was colder. Despite the highest temperature, it was from 8 to 10 Celsius degree, being much more lower than Mumbai. Moreover, in the most freezing coldest period days, it was only 4 Celsius degree, then went up to 9 on Saturday before falling into 3 on the following day.
Although Mumbai was hotter than Moscow, the figure of hours of daylight showed the opposite trend. In Mumbai, a day began at 6 a.m in survey’s day,ending approximately at 4 p.m , lasting for 10 hours. In contrast, a day in Moscow started earlier; the sun rose almost at 5 a.m and the sunset was nearly at 10 p.m. The numbers hours that daylight accounted for was about 17 hours; it was over a half of a day’s time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...of daylight in 2 cities which are Mumbai in Asia and Moscow in Europe in May 2007...
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Message: Use only 'lower' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: lower
...from 8 to 10 Celsius degree, being much more lower than Mumbai. Moreover, in the most free...
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Line 2, column 440, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'freezing the coldest'.
Suggestion: freezing the coldest
...ower than Mumbai. Moreover, in the most freezing coldest period days, it was only 4 Celsius degr...
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...e opposite trend. In Mumbai, a day began at 6 a.m in survey’s day,ending approxim...
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Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, then, in contrast, in general, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54185022026 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52096091227 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5859030837 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3707133389 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9166666667 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.23603664747 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168873037349 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718524977614 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100879113286 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125865741222 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802659108903 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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