These day, people are so dependent on facilities such as washing machines or dishwasher.As a result, they are being lazy to do things by themselves. What are the affects of these facilities and what problems will this create in the future ?
Owing to the technological advancement, use of washing machines and vacuum cleanerr have been increased day by day. Humanity is getting used to it and this dependency could affect the human king adversely, there are many others who believe it to be a blessing to us . However, this can have a negative impact on us and the next generation.
The development of technologies is good but there are many affairs that people have to do it by hand.Such as, houseworks is better if done by hand than by machines. But people are addicted to machines.Consequently, they get used to achieving everything easily and do not even try to achieve something more difficult. That is the reason why people being so lazy.Laziness is one of the biggest obstacles in the developmentof every major..Even, lazy workers can cause great harm to their employers.
Another major disadvantage of inactivity is on our health.In fact, inactivity leads to excess weight and since last decades many people suffering from overwieght, moreover, their number is not decresing regardless of any countermeasures and exercises. Globally, 39% of adults aged 18 years and older were overweight or obese in 2016 and now, 2023, that statistics increased to 51%.In addition, experts said that the main reason of obesity is that inactivity.Inactivity - the affect of technologies, such as, dishwashers. So , people should limit to using some technologies.
In conclusion, we cannot oppose the development of technologies but we can reduce using to to them.And, then the indicaters of each diseases and laziness are greatly reduced.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22745098039 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37781969404 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650980392157 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.9542146439 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.3 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15467956888 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593106866608 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312049460662 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814679431663 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469758433539 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Owing to the technological advancement, ...
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Line 1, column 268, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...rs who believe it to be a blessing to us . However, this can have a negative impac...
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... impact on us and the next generation. The development of technologies is good ...
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...fairs that people have to do it by hand.Such as, houseworks is better if done by han...
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...es. But people are addicted to machines.Consequently, they get used to achieving everything ...
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Suggestion: Laziness
... is the reason why people being so lazy.Laziness is one of the biggest obstacles in the ...
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...stacles in the developmentof every major..Even, lazy workers can cause great harm ...
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...dvantage of inactivity is on our health.In fact, inactivity leads to excess weight...
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...f technologies, such as, dishwashers. So , people should limit to using some techn...
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...ould limit to using some technologies. In conclusion, we cannot oppose the deve...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
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...of technologies but we can reduce using to to them.And, then the indicaters of each d...
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...gies but we can reduce using to to them.And, then the indicaters of each diseases a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22745098039 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37781969404 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650980392157 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.9542146439 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.3 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15467956888 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593106866608 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312049460662 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814679431663 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469758433539 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.