The table below shows the percentage of the population and the types of houses Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The table below shows the percentage of the population and the types of houses. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph illustrates the proportion of population and different types of accommodations in Central area, Green Park area and Southberg area

As can be seen from the chart, the inhabitants of 3 areas are quite similar while the choice of types of housing shows remarkable differences between 3 locations

Central area is the most preferred living area with 32100 compared to 32000 and 31700 of Southberg area and Green Park area respectively. It is notable that flat is the most popular type of housing in Green Park area, with over three-quarters (76%) of inhabitants living in Flat, tripling than that of Southberg area, with 25%, and five times higher than that of Central area, with 15%. While the detached house is less common in Green Park area with merely 5%, that type of housing is chosen to live by a large number of the population in the Central area with 39%, far surpassed the figure for Southberg Area with only 14%.

56% of dwellers in Southberg prefer inhabiting the terraced house to other types of housing compared to 14% and 18% of Green Park area and Central area correspondingly. Over a quarter of central area population (28%) built Semi-Detached to live meanwhile there is only 5% population in Green Park area and Southberg Area dwelling in Semi-Detached homes

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 503, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...at type of housing is chosen to live by a large number of the population in the Central area with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91743119266 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78912662634 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467889908257 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 22.4926829268 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.8927424791 43.030603864 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 214.4 112.824112599 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.6 22.9334400587 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0775280787521 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613250354793 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.018640035022 0.0843802449381 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693425168732 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175195990762 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 13.2329268293 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 61.2550243902 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.3012195122 183% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.4329268293 258% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.9970731707 175% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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