No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of moving from place to place to enhance the relationships with others. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely select to agree with this statement. it is my firm belief that everyone can adopt to live anywhere under any circumstances, so people can make superb connection with others for a number of reasons, and I will develop these concepts in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, living in many places during the life can gives an opportunity to acquire new knowledge and skills from dealing with other people from varies cultures and regions. For instance, from the history many travelers had a very popular stories about their success in many aspects of life because they moved to many regions and recognized new people which helped them to make connections with others.
Secondly, moving from place to place allow to the human to aid his country or the people around him by discover things that never had in his area. For example, In Egypt, there was a scientist how traveled to many places around the world, so after many years of making relations and connections with people, he found new things to bring with him to his mother country which allow him to enhance his country's economy.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that traveling and moving is an essential for each one to make his personal life better. This is because of many success evidence from the world which has a positive and passion stories.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'place to'.
Suggestion: place to
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Suggestion: It
...ly select to agree with this statement. it is my firm belief that everyone can ado...
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Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
... it is my firm belief that everyone can adopt to live anywhere under any circumstances, ...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...ving in many places during the life can gives an opportunity to acquire new knowledge...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'story'?
Suggestion: story
...story many travelers had a very popular stories about their success in many aspects of ...
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Suggestion:
...after many years of making relations and connections with people, he found new th...
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Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...ersonal life better. This is because of many success evidence from the world which h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 258.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8023255814 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47115746029 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562015503876 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 704.065955056 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.591732313 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.666666667 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.21951772744 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19103688206 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848043759338 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421926496594 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119674440938 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350129288468 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.