In your apartment building there is an entrance hall which you share with your neighbours. Recently there have been some problems with this shared area. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
introduce yourself and describe the problem or problems
suggest what could be done to improve the situation
suggest a meeting to talk about it
Dear Neighbours,
I am writing to address a recent issue that had arisen in our shared entrance hall.
Allow me to introduce myself, I am Jenice, the occupant of room unit 1203. It was initially agreed upon by all residents when the building was established that the shared entrance hall would serve as a guest waiting room. However, I have noticed a significant change in its usage lately. It has transformed into a playground for children of all ages, resulting in chaos and disorder. The constant running, playing, screaming in the hall has created an unsightly scene which greatly detracts from the overall appearance of our building. Additionally, it has come to my attention that some children have spitted on the floor, a behavior both unhygienic and impolite.
To rectify this situation and maintain cleanliness and tidiness, while also fostering a knowledgable community, I would like to suggest that we collectively educate our children on proper behaviour in public spaces and encourage them to utilize the outdoor playground for their recreational activities.
Furthermore, I propose organizing a meeting to discuss this matter further and collect feedback from all residents. I have reserved the community room on Friday night 8pm, March 25th and I would be grateful if you could attend.
Thank you for your attention and I look forward to seeing you at the meeting.
Yours sincerely,
Jenice Ng
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Neighbours, I am writing to address a recent issue t...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 450, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('unsightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('scene') instead of another adjective.
...ying, screaming in the hall has created an unsightly scene which greatly detracts from the overall...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you at the meeting. Yours sincerely, Jenice Ng
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23580786026 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9080346604 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672489082969 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2588861552 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9166666667 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170744515736 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580249992694 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502467483284 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838480680461 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509714853691 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 41.2886597938 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Neighbours, I am writing to address a recent issue t...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 450, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('unsightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('scene') instead of another adjective.
...ying, screaming in the hall has created an unsightly scene which greatly detracts from the overall...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you at the meeting. Yours sincerely, Jenice Ng
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23580786026 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9080346604 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672489082969 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2588861552 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9166666667 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170744515736 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580249992694 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502467483284 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838480680461 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509714853691 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 41.2886597938 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.